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hathor
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since 2000-01-17
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0 posted 2000-01-20 04:46 PM


Harmonic sounds
through devilish ears
connecting to reconcile
their same deep
dark secrets
from the heart
forever undone through
natures time
will always keep
them apart



[This message has been edited by hathor (edited 02-04-2000).]

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Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
1 posted 2000-01-20 05:49 PM


One of those things that I see something new in every time I read it. Love that. And the fact that I don't quite understand everything yet makes me think that it was very heartfelt. If everything is said and perfectly apparent, poetry loses something.
Great job.
Jannel

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