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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-01-20 12:23 PM


The earth as weve found
(Ya know Its the place that is round)
Is a awful place to visit
And an awful place to live

The decerning martian
Or prideful Piscean
Will avoid the place
(you know the one BLUE AND GREEN)

The food is quite terrible
The Air is obscene
As for scenery to much blue
Not enough green

The inhabitants are hairy
The locals are MEAN
And all they do is complain
About weather and how bad they feel

In retrospect its the perfect place
For determined adventure seekers
Out for a break but for all else
I fear (as a salesman) this is the end of my career


 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
JD
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61
N Prov
1 posted 2000-01-21 12:06 PM


Strage but i like it

JD



 Everything Dies



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-01-22 01:48 AM


Hey Walter, you upset hon?  These last two poems seem down.  Please email me if you wanna talk. (HUGS)  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


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