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a-alibaster
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0 posted 2000-01-20 10:52 AM


AS I  STAND.

As I stand before him naked,
I find my soul, long dead, has been awakened.
I screamed out his name,
unlocking every door as he came.
A thousand miles away he dwells,
but inside here, he knows all of my Hells.
Never have I seen his ancient face,
but at the same time it is etched in my mind. Every little trace.
As I stand before him naked,
I find my fascination has been awakened.
Shuttering, as I face him, with fear.
My mind screams, "why have you brought him here?!"
Feeling his cold breath upon my lips,
as my soul is devoured, piece by piece, in bleeding strips.
As I stand before him naked,
my heart bleeds with diffidence, awestrickened.



 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

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Vampire'sMistress
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 19

1 posted 2000-01-20 11:33 AM


just to say it again: you are pure motivation. thx
VM

danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 2000-01-21 01:55 AM


very haunting, very good!
Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

3 posted 2000-01-22 02:05 AM


Now this is what dark passions is all about!!! Way to go on this one... I have felt this way myself!!!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


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