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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-01-19 06:16 PM


I'm just a pawn in the game called life,
Easily manipulated, quick to receive,
All the love and understanding you offer,
Along with your desire to deceive.

Stupid little lady,
Wearing her heart for all to see,
What bull will she believe today,
Walk all over her, make sure she can't breathe.

I'll let her down, doesn't bother me,
She's not as tough as she pretends to be,
This works out well for me,
For with her submission I smell victory.

She doesn't matter,
So it doesn't matter what I do,
She doesn't really feel,
The way that others do.

Walk on her, promise friendship or love,
She'll be back sniffing tomorrow for sure,
She'll take any offers she can get,
She always says there is good hiding behind the door.

Well she isn't going to get it,
Too many lies do take their toll,
So soon she will really lose it,
It will be beyond her control.

And we can all laugh,
Watch the loser break,
For she is clever and knows the truth,
It's not her, but we that are the fakes.



 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Wendy Flora
Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182
Virginia
1 posted 2000-01-19 07:15 PM


You sound like you've been hurt a lot.   I hope you know we love you! -wen
brandywine
Junior Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 19
Illinois
2 posted 2000-01-19 08:01 PM


the illusions of life..... that of which we all either have lived or will one day encounter..... very well expressed
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-01-19 10:26 PM


Wendy thanks so much, I know my Passions friends love me.  This was a dramatization more than anything.
Brandy thanks too, your comment so true  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

4 posted 2000-01-19 10:41 PM


I hate getting walked over upon.  I dont percieve you as one of those types anymore!  

Oh yeah Isis do me a favor I need to cut a poem.  Part 2 of poeticpotential I came up twice and I renamed it.  Thanks

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-01-19 10:53 PM


Thanks Bojopy.  I'll look into it  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


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