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None Of It's Real
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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None of this is real, It's a nightmare without end, Kind or surreal, My life at it's end. There must be a signal beside my name, That scares people off, it's such a shame, Jaded, diseased and all alone, Where once I ran to it, I now turn from the throne. This ordeal we all call daily life, So painful for me the soul is in strife, This nightmare from which I cannot wake, Reality my slayer, belting home the stake. Try as I did, I failed to see, That my inner world is no sanctuary, Instead it's a dark void, cold and fearing, I listen hard no more I hear the cheering. My life is a fallacy, A game that I play, And I'm still alone, At the end of the day. No differences made, My helping hand bionic, It's all pretend, My soul is catatonic. It slumbers in coma, Fighting to wake, But the doctors won't help me, For I am a fake. Darkness my home, my only true friend, It is there for company when the day ends, It squeezes the life force from me, Until I'm devoid of all emotion, tis how it should be. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Oh my...once again Isis you've managed to write a wonderful poem. Definately left me thinking..and gave me a new perspective. I related to the whole thing but especially the 5th stanza. It describes my daily routine. If you ever want to talk...I'm not far...just an email away. You did a great job...although I'm not so sure I can call it beautiful because of how well I understand your emotion in this. But don't get me wrong...it is an excellent poem. Take care. ((Hugglez))  DE (Maharet) btw--> Did you get my email? I was just curious...I sent it went I had the chance to really sit down and write something worth sending. Thankx for listening. < !signature-->"They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks DE for saying you can relate to this the negative me!! Verse 5 is the cincher isn't it? Yes I got your email thanks, my fault for not answering. Everything seems to be going well there, so I thought I'd leave it at that. Thanks for the email offer, I know where to go if I need to vent some and vice versa for you too don't forget!! Hugglez to you too my friend Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Well hello and welcome to my life in this one!! Oh how this feeling can hurt so much. This was wonderful "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Another excellent read....Kinda paints a lonely pic...but what the hey...I guess they call it Dark Passions for a reason eh? There is no darkness; only places where there is no light! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Bojopy  Thanks too Majestic Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wonderful Isis This was me a few years back, trying so hard to purge all emotion. Thankfully, things are so much better. Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis, it does seem kind of just a dream doesn't it? This is an excellent poem, you have captured your feelings well. . . The light still shines my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Another excellent poem Isis ,your work always seems to strike a chord that rings true for me as well,keep up the great work and the clouds will part. Nameless |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
For every storm there is a rainbow, and a pot of gold. You write of the storm, your pen the rainbow, you are the pot of gold, beneath sightless eyes. love ya, KID. HAHA. HHHHHOOOOOOWWWWWLLLLLL Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'm glad this oldie was brought foward I really like this one. Thanks everyone and Joel I love you too Daddy A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This was flooded with emotion, a very moving piece. I could feel it. Kathleen |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Isis, this poem wrenches my heart. Truly, it is one of the best I think I have ever seen from you - but the pain behind it is excruciating. You've always extended me a hand when I was down, Please allow me to do the same for you now. You know how to reach me if you need to talk. Michael |
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