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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
On the horizon it comes The beautiful rays of the new sun lapping around the ocean warm We have weathered the final storm Now we are free we the children of Eve No more held or kept in sway All the peace that comes this day On the wings of the mist in grey The way spreads before us In the fine combed sand Of the world we inhabit Uphere on this land All the pain and misery All but gone away And the sereniny upon us on this day of days Peace thrives in this world No guns or knives No willing dead or pain survives In a world where hearts collide. Gentle winters and warm springs Wash away childish things Yet we all have far to go As gods creation flows to and fro Now we leave her for the stars Up past neptune round by mars for we all have far to go to the next star glimmering afar Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Beautiful Walter...loved the imagery.  ~*Dark Enchantress*~ "Enjoy the little things in life, for one day you may look back and realize they were the big things." -Antonio Smith |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Good thoughts here Walter Poe!! IF only it would happen! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes we feel the sadness and misery more than others. As long as we are in this body we will experience sadness but also joy and happiness. I look forward to the day when my soul will be released to experience life without the misery. Nicely written Walter. James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A beautiful dream Walter... you younger ones are the future of this world. You can make a dream like this become a reality. I hope you do, all of you. As usual Walter a beauty Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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shock gospel Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 33 |
there are those who say, wouldn't that be nice and some say, what a cool dream. But get a grip on the words, the Kingdom of God is at hand spoken by Jesus, and you'll see this poem, come to pass. |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Quite the imaginary...aren't we? *smile* Well done... Carman |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Nicely done. It would be great if the only things that collided, instead of guns and people or knives and people, were warm, caring hearts. Like another said (sorry I forgot who! ^_^  , I look forward to the day when my soul is set free from all the misery of this world.~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A great poem, I really love it |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Walter, this is a very beautiful poem and message, Im glad it got brought back up so I could see it.very good work. take care,janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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