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The Weeping of Sorrow |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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The Weeping of Sorrow Sorrow... and Sorrow weeps ageless tears throughout her timeless years as she wanders endlessly veiled in red stained tears, gray velvet dress, and long black hooded cloak. She remains tangled in the knowing that many wish their name she had never spoke. Sorrow... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh AA, how I can relate. So glad I didn't miss this beauty.  Well done Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
VERY HAUNTING...SUCH A LOVELY PIECE...LOOK FOWARD TO MORE!!! SORROW IS SUCH A MYSTERY...AS TO HOW DEEP PERHAPS, TRUE SORROW GOES...IT DISCRIMATES NONE...WELL DONE |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I love your work!! You draw your reader in with intense descriptions....excellent.... Jenny Lee Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Another work of art indeed. Vivid and deeply felt images. I too really enjoy your work. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I'm not sure about the second to last line? Can you tell me what it means? If I may ask? I was saddened by this but it was well written. "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Bojopy, I too had a bit of trouble with my own line there....I was attempting to state that Sorrow has trouble with the knowledge that others do not wish / desire her. Any suggestions? They would be much appriciated! I am so very glad that all enjoy my words as you do....It makes my darkness a bit brighter each time that one of you comments... I thank you all so very much for understanding my twisted little ways... Once again.....Many Many thank yous... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
a-alibaster I think I would have used the line "that many wish her name they had never spoke" I think it goes well with the sorrow topic. As if you may have damaged someone with your sorrow. What do you think? "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ahh..a-alibaster. This poem was deeply sad. I do love the picture of the woman in the cloak. Question: I think I know you..don't I? If I do, then I'll never utter a word! Count on it. I'm looking forward to more, Friend. Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Bojopy....I think you are right. It does sound better with out so many words. I thank you Much!!! Temptress.... : }~ You may , just may...know me very well. I believe this wonderful place was your suggestion...and here I can write and be myself....and I have grown greatly in and with my words here... I thank you for the suggestion... I hope all is well with you, seems that I keep missing you dear one! **Loads of Love from the dark one*** There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
SAD |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
a-alibaster: WONDERFUL!! ((((HUGS))) I knew it was you, and I'm glad to finally see you on here. Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I too, liked the image you created of a woman in a hooded cloak, it fit the description of sorrow well. |
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