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moshpit
Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines

0 posted 2000-01-18 07:03 AM



Lord knows I'm weak
And still i refuse to believe so
Burying every doubt deep inside
Although not happy, still pretending to be so

I seek every moment
spent in the company of nature
I cherish each memory
each soul

And though th times of solitude
are slowly dwindling away
A hint of loneliness still abounds
in each passing day

And while I don't expect
too much of myself
I do hope for something better
And though I am not sure
of what I will become
Let me be happier.

© Copyright 2000 guile canencia - All Rights Reserved
a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

1 posted 2000-01-18 10:21 AM


For some reason this is some thing that I could see myself writing in my journel.
Thank you for a look at myself from some one elses eyes and soul.


 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-01-18 07:11 PM


Moshpit, when did you read my journal??  You described my feelings here too.  Do all people think this way?
Lord give us all the strength to fight another day.  (HUGS)  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

3 posted 2000-01-19 01:58 AM


Wait a second this was in my mind. Can you read my mind. LOL  I related to this to much...Kinda scary...Great work!!!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



Poetic Sadness
Junior Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 12
Kelowna, BC, Canada
4 posted 2000-01-19 02:01 AM


It's amazing how many people feel this way, though it's only the certain talented few that can write of it effectively. Superb job.

Heather M.

 The things you fear are undefeatable not by their nature, but by your approach.
-Jewel

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