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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 2000-01-17 03:43 PM


The promise

Betraying one

The one is myself

The happiness

The joy

The tears one has cried

The hurt and the pain

All up inside

I took all of what I loved

The love I found

Praying that somehow, some way

This can be healed

Trusting in God to help me

Help me to find what lies beneath

Retreating into my shell

I don't want to go there again

The love I found that drew me out

I can't lose it now

I do not know the words

These words just touch barely the surface

Of what I feel and what I have to say

I want so badly to give what is locked up inside

Hidden away in the back of the mind

Tucked away where one cannot find

Chaotic, abstract

These things I feel and see

Only I understand, sense, and perceive

These wonderful things tied up in me

I can barely explain

One was so close but now far away

Second guessing all of my dreams

Everything that I love

Everything that I still hold true

I stomped on them ever so hard

Hurting

Pain

No one grasps this pain I feel

The regret

The dream

The hope



© Copyright 2000 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
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1 posted 2000-01-17 05:23 PM


Well done Justbleu.   It's not unusual to feel alone with your thoughts and emotions....only to later discover that you are not.
~*Dark Enchantress*~


 "Enjoy the little things in life, for one day you may look back and realize they were the big things."
-Antonio Smith


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2000-02-04 06:50 PM


Thank You Maharet for your sweet thoughts!!

Bridgette

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-04 07:46 PM


justblueu, this is a beautiful poem of self discovery and expression. I loved it! Glad I got to see it.
take care janet marie


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-02-04 08:02 PM


All too true, people say they understand etc. But does anyone every really??? Well done  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
5 posted 2000-02-05 05:20 PM


every time we are hurt, it makes it harder for the next person to get inside, to see who we are and what we have to offer. it even gets harder for us to remember who we are. emotions well captured. nice work.

 Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear.
-Tool-

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