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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
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Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-01-16 07:31 PM


Today is spossed to be worth something
Now it is a silent sadness
My heart is shatteres pieces
A person of shattered hope
Holding many lives in my hands
Afarid of breaking
I try hard not to shatter
Cause of what I hold togather



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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-01-16 07:48 PM


Neala I know where you are coming from.  When you are holding it together you are the one who has to be strong.  This is part of my life too, I hate it sometimes...  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
2 posted 2000-01-16 08:17 PM


I am a 15 girl. I should be able to live life. Inside I have to many lives togather and after a long period of time you can't do it anymore. But then if you fall than do all the peole casue I hold them up. So it sucks.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

DayDreamer
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since 2000-01-16
Posts 30

3 posted 2000-01-16 09:54 PM


I've read much of your poetry...but not this one.  I can find something it relates too....Just hold on for a little while longer.  Hope is just around the corner... ~Ana
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