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can't close out the voices....
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can't close out the voices.... |
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Poetic Sadness Junior Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 12Kelowna, BC, Canada |
The Voices there's screaming everywhere and i don't care what's the use in thinking anymore? there's sh*t in my life and i don't care what's the use in trying anymore? slaughter all these demons in my head don't awaken any ancient feelings of i'll fade in the pain it's so cold in this alienation but it's numb in your company there's screaming everywhere but i won't change what's the use in listening anymore? there's smoke all through my mind but i won't change what's the use in clarity anymore? it's all or nothing don't tempt me with your everything if i'm going to end up with zero alone on the ground with an empty heart again, a broken spirit again my blood, sweat and tears smudged like emotional oil all around it's so cold... there's still this screaming here how can i care? how can i stop it when it's all my own? there's voices inside my soul how can i care? what's the use in crying anymore? use up my life for dying on the floor |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I enjoyed this poem, been there myself I can assure you. Welcome again to DP. And could you do me a favour and change the asterisk for another word. It wouldn't change the meaning at all. I can do it, if you'd prefer. Any problems? Please remember my welcome and feel free to email me.  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dreemr Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 34Covington, LA, USA |
I definitely hear what you are saying. I loved the line "but its numb in your company" Reminiscent of an old Pink Floyd song  |
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