ABC's Of Death... Up For Challenge.

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Dark Poetry #1

ABC's Of Death... Up For Challenge.

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 2000-01-16 05:24 PM

Agonizingly Brash Cries
Desperately Enticing
Forevers' Grasp,
Hastily Inflicting
Justifiable Killings...
Lucidly Masquerading Nothingness'
Overpowering Pleasures,
Quintessentially Re-embracing Satans
Tourmented, Underappreciated,
Visually Wonderful Xenophobia...
Yesterdays' Zenith.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-01-16 07:24 PM

well done, you make it look easier than it is!!

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

Poetic Sadness
Junior Member

since 2000-01-15

Posts 12
Kelowna, BC, Canada

2 posted 2000-01-16 07:36 PM

Wow. I tried writing an alphabet poem like this, but it turned out NOTHING like yours! Congratulations, you definitely have talent!

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

3 posted 2000-01-18 02:15 AM

Thank you both very much for your kind comments

Two-worlds
New Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 7

4 posted 2000-01-18 02:51 AM

What is this challenge? this seems to be in a few of the poems and I was wondering. This was really good too and I enjoyed it

Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

5 posted 2000-01-19 12:33 PM

WHOA this was really good!! Well done

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

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