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LRAW
Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 15


0 posted 2000-01-16 02:20 AM


A Friendly Gift

Give me a knife
or maybe a gun
speak to me slowly
or I will run
cover me up
and pretend I'm not there
feel me shout
and breathe all my air

Hello again
You thought I was dead
Maybe I am
But we are still friends
Yes we are still friends

Tuesday was just
a prelude to truth
When I broke our mirror
hate ran right through
the cracks of our pit
and blackness set
covering you mind
time ate all your skin

I was so scared
when you ended my life
I turned all the wheels
and the lights shined so bright
I ripped out my eyes
so I could see straight
You blanketed the sun
in the name of fate

Hello again
You thought I was dead
Maybe I am
But we are still friends
Yes we are still friends

© Copyright 2000 LRAW - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-01-16 07:11 PM


Hey this was different I enjoyed the change of pace and format.  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


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