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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia

0 posted 2000-01-15 07:43 PM


Consumed by death only to pay
for a piece of ground.
That piece of ground you pay for
Wraps you in total darkness.
Death of the Imagination
leaves no soul.
with no soul
you only have death.
The price of everlasting life?
Life is Priceless!



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merely_a_jester
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67
Arkansas... that's all you get
1 posted 2000-01-15 11:51 PM


thank you for the read
it is thought provoking as well as a kind of pretty

merely_a_jester

DayDreamer
Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30

2 posted 2000-01-16 09:51 PM


I really like poetry that makes you think...this is definately one of them.  What is the price of life?  Is there one?  I really like the way you put it. ~DayDreamer
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2000-01-17 03:32 PM


I liked this piece a lot...it truly does make one think!!

Take Care
Bridgette

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
4 posted 2000-01-17 05:06 PM


Well done kitkat...definately a thinker too as DayDreamer has said.  

 "Enjoy the little things in life, for one day you may look back and realize they were the big things."
-Antonio Smith


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-01-17 11:11 PM


Indeed life IS priceless, we must make the most of everyday (as though it is our last).
Never leave things undone or unsaid for there may be no tomorrow.
Well done and thought provoking KitKat  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


Two-worlds
New Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 7

6 posted 2000-01-17 11:36 PM


Kitcat this was deeply depressing but so true!
Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

7 posted 2000-01-18 11:10 PM


kitcat that was me ^^^^^^ I couldnt stay away so now the true me is here again!!  I really did like this piece so true and depressing

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



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