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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Silence says much if you listen Telling the terrible truths hidden by noise A lonely feeling without equal Always talking, always slowing It brings out the darkest in what we trust Away with you, away … please Why won’t you be quite? Jason M. Mays |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Enjoyed this, and welcome to the dark forums. Hope to see more of you soon  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Silence can be very loud!!! I loved this!! Welcome to passions baerlon!!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
It is only in silence that you are able to listen to yourself. Wether what we here is good or bad, wanted or not, it all defines and changes us, making us what we are today. It is true, sometimes the truths are terrible, maybe even most of the time. But they too need to be dealt with, sooner than later. For they tend to fester inside until they become unbearable and almost unrecognizable, making it harder to deal with. Anyway, as you can see your poem really got me thinking. It was a truthful and enjoyable read. Welcome to passions and I look forward to more! |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Baerlon... Welcome to dark passions, indeed! I loved this. I was interested in seeing your version of "silence", being that I've previously posted my version of "silence" here. But we both had the same point, kinda. Anyway... I'm looking forward to seeing more of you here! Once again, welcome! You don't know me, but you don't like me. You say you could care less how I feel. But how many of you who sit and judge me have ever walked the streets in my shoes?-Korn ~Lil OnE~ |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Silence can say things that nothing else can. Welcome, baerlon. JOY |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Hi baerlon and welecome. I enjoyed this piece and hope to read more. In silence you learn much about yourself too. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Silence says much, and leaves so many questions to arise. Painful, hateful and almost unbearable in some cases. Very good piece. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Thank you all for your kind replies. I hope to post again soon, as well as read your writing. Thank you once again. baerlon |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Well done baerlon. I like the messege. Welcome to Dark Passions...looking forward to seeing more of you. ~*Dark Enchantress*~ "Enjoy the little things in life, for one day you may look back and realize they were the big things." -Antonio Smith |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Jason. I enjoyed your poem...sometimes silence can scream very loudly. Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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