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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia

0 posted 2000-01-14 10:26 PM


alas,
bricked cemented doorways,
ever forming gauntlet,
harbour inside .
juggling knives lethally,
momentarily navigating, only
performing queasy reinactments.
souls tortured unaware,
vaguely wishing  eXtermination.
yielding zip.

I do not know about this one, it was kinda hard.

                    

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Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

1 posted 2000-01-14 11:02 PM


This was hard I know!! Ok your next in the challenge!  I liked this piece though except the z that is hard to use!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



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