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dreemr
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 34
Covington, LA, USA

0 posted 2000-01-14 03:31 AM


On the wind I hear your voice,
And in the stars I see your face,
In the morning sun I feel your touch,
A warm and passionate embrace.

The sweet scent of your presence,
Seems to permeate the air.
I sense that you are near,
And turn to look but no one's there.

I close my eyes and there you are,
So real yet like a dream,
Then open them to find,
That nothing's ever as it seems.




 Sanity is the playground of the unimaginative.

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merely_a_jester
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67
Arkansas... that's all you get
1 posted 2000-01-14 03:39 AM


pretty
i like the way it progressed and am particularly fond of the end
well done

merely a jester

Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

2 posted 2000-01-14 04:19 AM


Nothing is what it seems!!! But if you let yourself believe it is, then it is!
I am apart of this piece in all its words!  

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


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