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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
To begin A face of stone This way of life I've come to known Grasping on Something bleeds Holding on Forget my needs It's you my friend begin to fall My brother dear One for all They told us this A year ago The pain we felt We'd come to know I wait silent My eyes alert My body aches My spirit hurt Thirsting on My bitter tears I dream of home Subside my fears Given mercy I hear your cry You gave me all I need to fly..... Thankyou To Everyone in this Forum...your poetry is beautiful...I am Arcadia..20 years old...in the Marine Corps...stationed in Okinawa...far away..things here are rough..this job is lonely...you all give me motivation..your poetry touches me...making everything seem beautiful..thankyou |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Arcadia what lovely words for us all to share. Here we can all speak and our spirits can indeed fly. Glad we offer comfort to you as Passions does for most of us. You need not be so lonely now, you can journey with us as we discover our writings and ourselves. Thanks for the tribute ((HUGS)) and know you can email myself anytime, if you need or want to talk.  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
Thank you Isis...I am much obliged with your reply...very assuring to be able to communicate in such a beautiful way...poetry |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I myself haven't been on or posted for a few days. So you may not know me, but I came across this, thought it was beautiful and had to comment. This is indeed a comforting place. And it is a pleasure to see more and more people coming here and finding a place to set themselves free. I look forward to more of your writings. |
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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
Definitely comforting, I love the way everyone is so open... i look foward to your poetry as I am sure it is amazing...as everyones...simply because it's all unique |
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merely_a_jester Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67Arkansas... that's all you get |
being new as well it is uplifting to see the feeling poured into these pieces well done and there is a anticipation to see such as this in future writings merely a jester |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I really appreciate this in all its ways...... Let me tell a story: You are why (the marines) we can even express ourselves!!! And again thank you from all of us AMERICANS who know what you do!!!!!!!!!!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
This is a great place isn't it ARCADIA? A place to let yourself go and express yourself! I hope you continue to post here! JOY |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hi Arcadia, I enjoyed your poem. I have a son in the Army in Germany and I live in Hawaii and we are both far from our home. I try to fly back to California at least twice a year to visit my family and friends. Although this is my home I look forward to those trips cause my real home will always be where my family is. James |
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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
THANKYOU, TO ALL OF YOU. I LOOK FOWARD COME THE END OF MY WEEKEND, ON MONDAY...TO READ WHAT YOU ALL HAVE WRITTEN, GIVEN ANY CHANCE...ANY TIME I GET ON THE COMPUTER TO READ....ABSORB..AND RELATE...SO SO BEAUTIFUL |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Such a heartfelt verse....I enjoyed very much! Jenny Lee Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
An art is always more appreciated when their are those who will read respect and share These are the words that we all follow and believe Walter Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Arcadia, Lovely words soar from a soul that flies with the forever free birds. Awaiting more... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
I know well the meaning of your words Once a Marine always a Marine USMC 67-70 Graduate University of South Vietnam Well done my friend There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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ARCADIA Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23 |
Free Byrd...my admiration for everyone who helped shape the Marine Corps and who paved our way... Us young Marines only hope to live up to the legends of the past...such as yourself...thankyou JMLEE12345...yes home is where where the family is...i am understanding that more and more as my heart longs for my loved ones...thankyou |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Just promise you'll live hard. Get everything you can out of everyday. Don't ever regret anything you do. And NEVER, I mean NEVER take any prisoners. They slow you down and their no fun to have with you on a date. Best Wishes There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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