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Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 391


0 posted 2000-01-13 03:44 AM




Night after night I write
Night after night I type
   to the screen of friends unknown

Day after day I dream
Day after day it seems
   my feelings for you have grown

You of all people I let in
You of all people again
          I let my words see

Tell me why am I afraid
Tell me why do I convey
         deep thoughts of me

To the dark passions where I roam
Am I a poet; Will I ever be known?

wow i just wrote that off the top of my head. so?< !signature-->

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



[This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-15-2000).]

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haze
Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528
Bethlehem, PA USA
1 posted 2000-01-13 10:36 AM


Very cool! Ya' done good & then you say you're not a poet...well wake up.

*~haze shakes Bojopy's hand, does the guy-thing-slap on the back* You're alright!


TA
~haze

[This message has been edited by haze (edited 01-13-2000).]

kitkat
Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
2 posted 2000-01-13 11:20 AM


Yeah-You're a poet and
      Didn't ya know it
Believe in yourself as others do!

Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

3 posted 2000-01-13 12:36 PM


Off the top of my head is my speciality i find trying to think the poem through first makes me unsure

Maybe its just me but i prefer writing like this

Well done

 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-01-13 06:17 PM


Want a description of yourself?  You are the thinking man's poet!!!  We are all glad you shared yourself with us, and hope you will continue to do so.
:   :   :

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



ARCADIA
Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23

5 posted 2000-01-13 08:36 PM


Bojopy..you are amazing
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
6 posted 2000-01-13 10:04 PM


Bojopy-
By all means continue sharing your work here!  I agree with Walter Poe.  That is what I too am the best at!  Writing off the top of my head.  Later, and only later will I then edit my work.     


 JOY


danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
7 posted 2000-01-13 10:53 PM


Bo- thanks for the tribute. I often wonder the same things. It seems so much easier to open up here. I can't even talk to my closest friends and family members about some of the emotions I write about here. It is a wonderful thing! Thanks again for sharing your talent and kind words.  
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
8 posted 2000-01-14 09:56 AM


Thanks, Bojopy.

Your contribution to Dark Passions has been a great one and I am glad you find comfort in our friendship, here.  


Michael

Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

9 posted 2000-01-15 02:28 AM


WOW I did'nt think I would get any responses on this one.  At least not this many.  I thank you all for such kind words!!!!  My passion friends I give (((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))
FROM BOJOPY< !signature-->

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)




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