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dreemr Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 34Covington, LA, USA |
The words flow freely from my pen, Like tiny demons haunting, taunting. The whys and why nots, Like tickling, torturing tentacles, Tease my brain, telling me I am insane. They steal away the peace I once thought came with age, Yet now age and time are my worst enemies. I hear the pitiful cries of lost dreams, Lamenting desperately, hopelessly for revival, Writhing in the agony of unrealization. They will not die, But only suffer endlessly, Imprisoned by circumstance. I smell the foul stench of conformity, Wrenching from my grasp and dragging from my reach, The things that I want, The things that I need, The things that need me. I watch, like a movie, My life as it should be. The scenes play out without a plot, Yet still they enthrall me. The actors waft about like apparitions, There, then gone, Speaking in cryptic dialogue. I laugh, I cry, I feel at home. And then the lights come up. They blind me, sicken me, I feel I may throw up. The medicine will heal me soon. I feel the warmth already. Soon I will rest. True peace WILL come at last. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Wonderful.. simply wonderful!!!! I have no words. I'm speachless and thats hard to do!!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
Sheer Excellence! You have captured depth & precision in a fine-toothed tome. Extreme Kudos! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Jenny hopping up and down in her puter chair!! LOL...exquisite descriptions in this I love it!! Jenny Lee Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
I agree with all those before me. exquisite indeed. |
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