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Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 391


0 posted 2000-01-12 11:21 PM




Edangering a dream with the thoughts of another
Forgetting to forget about ...... about any other
Wasting time to her and all her thoughts
The freedom once had will always be caught

Tumbling down a hill that was already laid
An eruption in emotion occured and was conveyed
Does one join the game; to be hurt again
Does one travel those roads; of heartache within

So torn inside to the slow drum of this decay
But hopes will find her somewhere; somehow; someday


 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-01-12 11:26 PM


Indeed hope can sustain you.  But don't let it become your master.  Is this about a past love or the future Mrs. Bojopy?  My blessings for every happiness for you my friend  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 2000-01-14 01:02 PM


We are all nothing without hope.
Penned well B  

Jenny Lee


 Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born.

L. Pirandello
16th Century Dramatist


Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

3 posted 2000-01-14 11:07 PM


Yeah Isis this was about a past love that went away.  Thanks JennyLee for the response!  I dont like to tell when I wrote such a piece but I was at a bar and this came to me.  I wrote it there right on the spot.  The bartender (girl) was fallin all over me after I let her read it.  Never again!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



dreemr
Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 34
Covington, LA, USA
4 posted 2000-01-14 11:22 PM


B...curious about why it went away...and u dont have to reply, but do i read it right when i interpret that there might have been someone else involved?
Anyway...enjoyed reading you as usual.

Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

5 posted 2000-01-15 06:01 AM


Well dreemr at first I thought there was noone involved.  But in the end I think there was.  My clues were someone else in the picture not even a month later.  kinda hurt but thats the way things go I guess, well with me!!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



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