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AZRAEL
Junior Member

since 2000-01-04

Posts 14

0 posted 2000-01-12 10:46 PM

Tainted by hate and hurt.
Dyed in death and destruction.
Painted with decay and decadance.
Contaminated with past and pain.
Tainted blackish red my blood is.
Tainted forever the vampyre remains.

If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die.

Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

1 posted 2000-01-12 10:53 PM

This is short but very well read into. The last line was excellent!!!!

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

AZRAEL
Junior Member

since 2000-01-04

Posts 14

2 posted 2000-01-12 10:56 PM

I thank thee Bojopy your words mean much, and the final line is the heart and (BLOOD) of this poem, for many reasons dear to me.

If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die.

Bathory
Junior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 11
OH.

3 posted 2000-01-13 10:28 PM

for I know your past open your heart free your sorrow,you may have memories, but you shall not see that life ever again,
theres a new life you must begin.I love you and never shall I see you hurt again.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-01-13 11:29 PM

Whereas I have glimpsed the kindness in your soul. I don't know your past, but I DO believe you shan't journey there again. (HUGS)

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

5 posted 2000-01-14 12:53 PM

Contaminated with past and pain.

As Always Tom your pen is mighty

I liked this very much.

Jenny Lee< !signature-->

Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born.

L. Pirandello
16th Century Dramatist

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 01-14-2000).]

AZRAEL
Junior Member

since 2000-01-04

Posts 14

6 posted 2000-01-15 01:17 PM

Kristi, Isis. Worry not I shant ever travel back to my past though I still have pictures and memories that shant ever leave.
Jenny I truly hope my pen is mighty for I feel my words dont totally express that which I feel inside for in all languages especially english, there just arent the words to explain me and my feelings.

If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die.

Twi
Junior Member

since 2009-05-21

Posts 22
the Underworld

7 posted 2009-05-27 08:06 AM

Yes, well...
I think you're profile tis very interesting... but the fact that you said your occupation was a VAMPYRE kind of erks me..lol.

(Please don't ask me what erks means because i have no idea...it just sounds cool.)

§Bella§

"Everybody looking at me in the center of the ring just like a circus. When I crack that whip everybody gonna trip just like a circus..."

moonbeam

Member Elite

since 2005-12-24

Posts 2356

8 posted 2009-05-27 11:35 AM

... except you spelled it incorrectly:

irks

moonbeam

Member Elite

since 2005-12-24

Posts 2356

9 posted 2009-05-27 11:36 AM

... or maybe you didn't:

http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=erks

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