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AZRAEL
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0 posted 01-12-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for AZRAEL   Email AZRAEL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AZRAEL

Tainted by hate and hurt.
Dyed in death and destruction.
Painted with decay and decadance.
Contaminated with past and pain.
Tainted blackish red my blood is.
Tainted forever the vampyre remains.


 If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die.
© Copyright 2000 TOM BURNS - All Rights Reserved
Bojopy
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1 posted 01-12-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for Bojopy   Email Bojopy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bojopy

This is short but very well read into.  The last line was excellent!!!!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

AZRAEL
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2 posted 01-12-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for AZRAEL   Email AZRAEL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AZRAEL

I thank thee Bojopy your words mean much, and the final line is the heart and (BLOOD) of this poem, for many reasons dear to me.

 If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die.
Bathory
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3 posted 01-13-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for Bathory   Email Bathory   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bathory

for I know your past open your heart free your sorrow,you may have memories, but you shall not see that life ever again,
theres a new life you must begin.I love you and never shall I see you hurt again.
Isis
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4 posted 01-13-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Whereas I have glimpsed the kindness in your soul.  I don't know your past, but I DO believe you shan't journey there again. (HUGS)  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


JennyLee
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5 posted 01-14-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Contaminated with past and pain.

As Always Tom your pen is mighty  
I liked this very much.

Jenny Lee


áWords bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born.

L. Pirandello
16th Century Dramatist



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AZRAEL
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6 posted 01-15-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for AZRAEL   Email AZRAEL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AZRAEL

Kristi, Isis. Worry not I shant ever travel back to my past though I still have pictures and memories that shant ever leave.
Jenny I truly hope my pen is mighty for I feel my words dont totally express that which I feel inside for in all languages especially english, there just arent the words to explain me and my feelings.


 If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die.
Twi
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7 posted 05-27-2009 08:06 AM       View Profile for Twi   Email Twi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Twi

Yes, well...
I think you're profile tis very interesting... but the fact that you said your occupation was a VAMPYRE kind of erks me..lol.

(Please don't ask me what erks means because i have no idea...it just sounds cool.)

žBellaž

"Everybody looking at me in the center of the ring just like a circus. When I crack that whip everybody gonna trip just like a circus..."

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8 posted 05-27-2009 11:35 AM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

... except you spelled it incorrectly:

irks  
moonbeam
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9 posted 05-27-2009 11:36 AM       View Profile for moonbeam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonbeam

... or maybe you didn't:

http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=erks
 
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