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I'd Not Be Missed |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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I'm not really wanted, < !signature-->My light could burn out so easily, No one would hear the gentle sigh, As life and breathe passed out of me. In the coffin all dark confines, My fear it knows no bounds, I'd be screaming with each shovel full of dirt, And no one would hear those desperate sounds. The cemetary would be empty, The prince of darkness would say the eulogy, And some faceless demon would escort me, On my road to eternity. No flowers, angels or harp song for me, Only stifling darkness would I see, And Lucifer would be waiting, To rape and torture me. My sentence would be eternal despair, Never again to see the light of day, Never to know a moment of peace, For my sins it is now time to pay. I'd be gone, And not one tear would be shed, For no one really notices the passing, The departure of the living dead. P.S. JUST TO MAKE EVERYONE HAPPY I SHALL EXCLUDE PASSIONS FROM THIS SCENARIO. OK  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 01-12-2000).] |
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AZRAEL Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 14 |
I hope this is truly not about the for I and many people would miss thine beuty of face mind and writings. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Isis this cannot be true as we all need you in here! Especially us if you know what I mean!!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Not really, just generalising, but you do wonder too you know?? Thanks Azrael Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks too Bojopy as I said I wonder is all, I don't believe it though ok Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Winged One-- Feeling a bit down of late? I am quite sure I have had these same thoughts most recently. I am going to drag on through, though. Never fear. I wish for you the same. See you on the other side of sadness. DB |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Deep Blue, just travelling that old roller coaster of life, you have the good and the bad. The good is waiting for me with the sunrise. Missed you my friend. ((HUGS)) Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Oh Lisa...you have no idea how this expresses exactly how I feel tonight. Soul sisters to the end. ((hug)) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
If you were within reach I'd SMACK you for this one, Isis. You know better I hope. You'd be more than missed in this forum alone. Michael |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thought you would relate Maz (hugs) my sister. Michael I said at the bottom this excluded passions ok? Smack me eh? That could be interesting Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dreemr Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 34Covington, LA, USA |
Isis, This was very thought provoking for me. I have had these feelings many times. And at the times when they were most intense I actually had fleeting thoughts of bringing this about (if u know what i mean) just to see if my fears were correct. But thats the kicker, we would never know who misses us, and even we could in fact look up from the grave to find out how many friends and loved ones we truly have by how much they would greive our passing, what good would it do us then? Just some thoughts Thank you for the poem. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
We will never know will we, but it is an interesting topic. Here's a negative for you, you all would miss me sure, I know this in my heart, but you are all in America, and would be unable to come to my funeral, so then as I said it would be small and lonely. It sux that a major part of my family are so far away.... Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Comon Isis...is this for real...how do you come up with stuff like this. I'd miss you cause I look at your smiling face every now and then to cheer myself up although I don't visit passions dark as often as open poetry...sometimes its interesting, you know like when you go to a movie..sometimes you want a comedy, sometimes love stories..like those Julia Roberts movies, sometimes suspense, sometimes action or dark movies.. Why don't you put an ad in the newspaper listing the web site to get more writers from Australia. Just a casual suggestion. One more suggestion. Try reading Stendhal's book called Love or De L'Amour...try thinking about love a little bit...write a poem about love..enough about death cause it will come soon enough for all of us. And you're probably going to tell me you have already written plenty of poems about love, right. Before I go a silly joke for you. What would Elvis be doing if he were still alive today? He'd be scratching on the inside of the coffin and singing "Let me out of here today...cause I got a hunka, hunka, burnin' love to give away." Take care. James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
You would indeed be missed my kindred. . . I do not know what it would be like without you. . . and I don't think that I would ever want to find out. . . Strength to you my friend. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Gee what a reaction... I am loved by all the tributes and loving messages you have all given me thankyou. James my friend i LOVE love, and think about it constantly and feel it many times a day, when I look at my son, when with family or friends, or my loved ones here at Passions. You should know as a poet, sometimes the pen is the master and you just write, you have no control, that is what this was. I am happy for now at least. Thanks for the concern. I'm touched Sven I'll always have you I know and for that I'm forever grateful. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Isis please don't misunderstand me I enjoyed your poem..it was wonderful..you just caught me in a playful mood. My thoughts were not to discourage you from writing dark poetry, it was to encourage you to share your Love with us. I confess I have not read all your writings so it wasn't really fair for me to comment like I did. I do know from experience that our writings can reflect personal experiences we are living. So I was just concerned about you. Take care, James A womans beauty, is nothing but the sum of the fulfilment of all the desires you have been able to formulate about her. ....Stendhal from a book he named Love-1822 |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I know James, perhaps I will write a love poem and dedicate it to you. Stay tuned Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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