Twilight of Kisses Crimson

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Twilight of Kisses Crimson

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

0 posted 2000-01-12 08:41 PM

Twilight of Kisses Crimson

Do we Vie
in Vignettes
Vide
Who burns

Whitest?

Dare we Taunt
this cock
Tail?

Do we bask
in Viridity
this Shade that
hath died us
Black and Red?

Muse something about
Chicago?

Or do we Cross
the Chasm
in the Twilight of
Kisses Crimson

Till dawn?

And not look down?

How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius

Isis
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since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-01-12 10:31 PM

Hard to respond to this one, I liked it, and it's left me thinking.....

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

2 posted 2000-01-12 10:45 PM

I'm not sure are you and haze in a battle with words right now? I'm enjoying both of your work right now.< !signature-->

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

[This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-12-2000).]

haze
Senior Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 528
Bethlehem, PA USA

3 posted 2000-01-13 03:14 AM

What color shoes am I wearing? I'm not looking down...

This poem BTW is beautiful & poignant, like an arrow of red lettered words.

I'm sorry about Chicago (truly).

(XXXOO)

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

4 posted 2000-01-13 09:10 AM

No need for being sorry, I liked it, actually.

And tis only as beautiful as it's inspiration.

XXX

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