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haze
Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528
Bethlehem, PA USA

0 posted 2000-01-12 09:57 AM


He Wants Me


to play in the darque
with dead things
that lie
Shivering
Tumultuous Revenge
of Vidas He says

I say A spasm
It'll pass
like time

Like The Time
we sat cross-legged
Shadows Peeling
red word paint
from poets' walls
Licking glue
to chants
I Love You's

Too
More dead things
wallowing
in dark.




[This message has been edited by haze (edited 01-12-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Haze McElhenny - All Rights Reserved
Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

1 posted 2000-01-12 11:09 AM


Very dark!!!!

dreams of nightmares i cant hide, hunt me down but i cant fight, all i do is run away everynight, everyday.

 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia
2 posted 2000-01-12 11:36 AM


Thriving in darque.. basked in shadows that illuminated... and knew there was a DNA swap.

XX

haze
Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528
Bethlehem, PA USA
3 posted 2000-01-12 12:34 PM


Poe-Poet...thank you

LR...a handful of Narcissus wrapped in red X's for you...thank you.

Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

4 posted 2000-01-12 08:47 PM


Dark oh yeah!  I think you belong here now haze!!!!  Keep them coming!!!!!!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-01-12 10:33 PM


Dark and haunting visions....

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2000-01-20 06:31 PM


Haze I like this.   Who is this person or object that wants you to play? .... James

haze
Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528
Bethlehem, PA USA
7 posted 2000-01-20 06:46 PM


jmlee...LOL Thank you...You want me to give up all my secrets? Its just some phantom who draws me into the darque and plays with my toes...*S*

Thanks Again...
~haze

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2000-01-20 06:56 PM


Sorry Haze I just couldn't resist asking.  And no I don't want to diminish the sweet mysteries of life....James
JD
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61
N Prov
9 posted 2000-01-21 12:02 PM


Strage but i like it

JD



 Everything Dies



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