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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia 
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Dirty molecules The way dirty molecules enter my mouth to only have cancer consume me which leaves my life dry. To only have a placid moment to be able to mount my fear to face the freak-in time My soul will blanket the universe. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Well done. Very powerful. A good read. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
I'm not sure how to react to this. I loved it but it seemed to need more. Please do not take that the wrong way. I feel like you had more to say. Did you?..... "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Hi bojopy, Actually this poem was a written exercise. I was given certain words that I had to use in the order in which they were given. When I saw the words I tried to make them work together in a short but direct verse. I like exercises like this one. It helps get the creative juices flowing. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
A written exercise huh for what? School? I enjoyed this and want to know how I get on such exercises? "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Hi bojopy, not in school. I graduated many many years ago. I found this exercise on another site. Let me try to help you out here a some words use them in verses in the order they come in. Lets give it a try 1.nectar 5.transfix 2.effrontery 6.perverse 3.splendour 7.ablate 4.callous 8.irruption Now I just picked these words from the dictionary. Give it a go  |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Ok I'll give it a shot. These words are hard though. I've never done this before so don't make fun of me. LOL "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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