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Dark Poetry #1

& Why ( a short one)

Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

0 posted 2000-01-11 05:36 PM

The rooms eye is filled with rain
                   but yet unseen
      Who made the rain
                     but only eye

The inner depths of thought are lurkin
                      but yet unheard
       How will it surface
                     and which way from

The life peddle for forward is gone
                   but not forever
        Where can it be
                               & why

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2000-01-11 09:17 PM

It might be behind you, you just might be looking backwards here. Good poem.

Michael

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-01-12 12:36 PM

Perhaps you'll be able to see it when the rain washes everything clean.??
Why can't you see, cos it's dirty?? HEHE Cos you don't want to? You can't bring yourself to look???????????
I love this Bojopy you make us think!

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

3 posted 2000-01-12 12:41 PM

Good question. Only you can find the answer.
Nice work

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

4 posted 2000-01-12 01:32 AM

I adore the way you entice the mind! Yet another one to ponder. It is a question that lies deep within all of us. Alot of times you don't realize you've wandered off your path until it's too late.

Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

5 posted 2000-01-12 03:10 AM

danni I used to think that things happened for a reason but its hard to think that anymore!! But I'm writing and I know this was one of the paths I needed to take!!!

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

6 posted 2000-01-12 11:54 PM

Michael I'm not sure what you meant by your comment. Could you explain if you reread this one?

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

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