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Quiet Lightning
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since 1999-12-26
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0 posted 2000-01-10 04:13 PM



        Feeling high
Sometimes I get a feeling of joy
my emotions then take control
I jump up and down to let the whole world know
my happiness inside has just began to explode
if I had some wings I'd fly like the crow
moving really fast cause time will surely pass
I don't get this feeling often
so I try and make it last
Joy is the cure for a good day
that's why I like to feel high
Although this is winter
it feels like the month of July
No matter how people will look at me
the minute I scream out loud
don't get discouraged
I just feel really proud
If your not quite sure what I was thinking
My head was in the cloud
drifting in the air
with my feet far off the ground
I come back to reallity
and the feeling of high is gone
soon before I know the feeling of high will come
I'll wait for the feeling
cause I know it won't be long


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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
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1 posted 2000-01-10 05:25 PM


Great poem here...it's those glorious highs that we (or atleast some of us) so rarely get that make all that pain and anguish we suffer seem a small price to pay. Although short lived, (atleast for me) it is a feeling worth the long wait. You described this very well.  

 "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience."
-Gandhi

~*Angel of Darkness*~

Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

2 posted 2000-01-10 08:02 PM


aahhhhhhhh yes the highs in life!!!! So glorious as they are but always seem to fade away.  I hope the highs in you come often!!!!! and in me too!
I liked the idea of this piece..

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-01-10 11:53 PM


Indeed those highs in life are all to rare, they are worth waiting for.  Well done again  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Michael
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4 posted 2000-01-11 07:39 AM


Reality sucks!....
Enjoy those moments of having your head in the clouds.  Indeed, they are rare.


Michael

danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
5 posted 2000-01-12 02:08 AM


Its been said already and I agree. Those moments are few and far between. But somehow seem to be enough to get you through the next dose of pain. I too liked this.
FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

6 posted 2000-01-12 10:13 AM


Cherish the highs. In the scheme of things, the lows are just minor irritations.
Scream out loud often, it feels good. I've been known to HOWL at the sight of a full moon myself.    

 There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix



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