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Sven
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0 posted 2000-01-10 01:21 PM


I've decided to that I want you all to myself
Not to keep in a box on the shelf,
But to keep you in my heart, only you
And show you that no one can love you like I do.

Daily we stand out, adored by the throng
Sometimes, jealousy can creep in before long
But if I have you in my heart all the time
No chinks in our armor will it find.

So we will go out among the crowd
Knowing, should the cheering become too loud
That I have you and you have me
And our love forever, always will be.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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1 posted 2000-01-10 03:00 PM


Very nice Sven...it seems almost rare now for someone to hold onto to someone else so sincerely...it's nice to know that atleast someone does. And if you don't feel this way towards anyway...it's still pretty anyway.  

 "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience."
-Gandhi

~*Angel of Darkness*~

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2 posted 2000-01-10 03:38 PM


I liked this poem,and the atmosphere
Isis
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3 posted 2000-01-10 07:22 PM


Beautiful thoughts and sentiments Sven, *sigh* I'm soooooooo jealous  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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4 posted 2000-01-10 08:05 PM


WOW the love of your life must be pretty special.  Very sweet thoughts here.

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



Michael
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5 posted 2000-01-11 07:28 AM


Beautiful piece, Sven.  Sometimes it's best to shut the crowd out anyway, just to find out what your own voice is saying, but even more so in the eyes of love.     Good poem.

Michael

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