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a-alibaster
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0 posted 2000-01-08 03:00 PM



Deamons of Deceit

In purple velvet sky
where moon drenched deamons fly
there is a char winged angle
  that falls to her knees to cry.
Drowning all memmories within
with an ocean of crimson tears tinted with sin.
Pedastole crumbled beneath her alibaster feet.
Damned for eternity to dwell with the deamons
  of her deceit.


 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

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danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
1 posted 2000-01-08 03:05 PM


A- this was beautiful. It flowed so smoothly. Read it twice before I commented. I could easily put myself into that role. Loved this!
a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

2 posted 2000-01-08 03:15 PM


danni....
once again, many thank yous.


 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 2000-01-08 05:35 PM


I loved how descriptive you are here  

I could see the purple velvet sky...and
feel the angels charred wings...along with the ocean spray from the blood tainted  tears.

Jenny


 Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born.

L. Pirandello
16th Century Dramatist


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