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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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Mr. and Mrs. Snowman seeing the other melt like Vampyres in Sunlight prayed the January thaw was Indian Summer [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 01-08-2000).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh ha ha ha! This was surprising to say the least! I was preparing to read something bloody and sucking - - LOL! Never did I dream twould be about this! Fabulous idea you had here! Geesh, what else goes on in that head of yours?!?!?!  ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I like the way you used the snowpeople metaphor here. Cute. Jennifer Lee Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Very surprising ideed. But enjoyable none the less. |
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Quiet Lightning Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56 |
I didn't get the poem but unfortunatly I'll come across another one of your poems and hopely I'll have more input |
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ChainedAngel Member
since 2000-01-07
Posts 55tx |
Short yet very fulfilling Very interesting how you stated and compared the vulnerability of two extemely different things, Vampyres and snowmen. VERY interesting. There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead - B. Warner |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
LMAO at you! I got your email, and I don't know why you're wondering what I think of you now... I'm thinking what I always did...."strange"...... LOLYou have a very interesting way of writing, and I always like to see what you come up with! You're so funny - quit being paranoid! hehehe I've just been trying to give you plenty of privacy in Adult so you and haze can chase eachother around naked in there! LOL Just kidding....I know you two are just having fun! It's fabulous isn't it? Gennifer ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000! |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Metaphors are a great way to write keep it up!!< !signature--> "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) [This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-09-2000).] |
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