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lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
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New Hampshire, USA

0 posted 2000-01-08 11:52 AM


It's dark now
Deep contemplation
What for?
I'm better than this,
Aren't I?
Is it too much,
To ask?
The fire crackles
Flames dancing wildly
As are my thoughts
What causes that?

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danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
1 posted 2000-01-08 12:55 PM


Lostboy- you have described the scene that often goes on in my head. Sometimes I wish I didn't have to think at all.
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 2000-01-08 02:26 PM


Love this LB.
As always, to me anyway,you hit the mark  
Deep questions to indeed ponder My Friend !

Jenny


 Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born.

L. Pirandello
16th Century Dramatist


lostboy
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New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-01-08 02:26 PM


Same here danni, especially when I try to go to sleep.
lostboy
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4 posted 2000-01-08 04:24 PM


Thank you Jen. I much appreciate your words.
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