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Sven
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0 posted 2000-01-07 01:29 PM


Star light, Star bright
The only star I see tonight
How I wonder how you are
You who were a shining star.

Moon glow, Moon show
The one whose love I want to know
Her heart once gentle and filled with light
Has now become black, black as the night.

Heart ache, Heart break
The pain is more than she can take
Can she ever find someone
Whose light can fill her heart with sun?

Love seek, Love find
The one she can love for all time
One has come to save her heart
And together a new life they'll start

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Niemczak
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1 posted 2000-01-07 03:01 PM


That was absolutely wonderful Sven!!!!
Isis
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Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-01-07 05:34 PM


Beautiful Sven, as always.  

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
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3 posted 2000-01-08 08:14 AM


Sven, I enjoyed the simplicity of this piece so very much!
Keep 'em coming  

Jenny Lee


 Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born.

L. Pirandello
16th Century Dramatist


Bojopy
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4 posted 2000-01-09 10:38 PM


I enjoyed this as I have a sister who needs this!!!!!! Beautiful work here!!
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