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My Gift To You |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
Focus on me you told me. Let me guide you to another place. For only you would I sumbit to myself. No words were said but your presence was all around.Not for a moment did you seem distant.A part of me was formed.A part I had no idea was inside of me. Crying for the love I have for you and wondering how this could be.You are a teacher by nature to have taken me to the ends of extacy thru my mind. How could I have been so misguided for so long.None of that matters anymore.Now you are locked inside of my core, your touch, your scent, your soul. [This message has been edited by summer (edited 01-05-2000).] |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Aaaah, the beauty and power of the love. Nice work summer. |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Fantastic summer, A very telling piece. Developing your own strength I see. Keep growing. -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Summer..I enjoyed this very much. It sings to the heart and soul. Thanks for posting it  Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
A realization piece here I loved it. You somtimes do not know somthing until its not there. (such as love) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very beautiful poem, Summer. Michael |
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