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AZRAEL
Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 14


0 posted 2000-01-04 09:07 PM


"SHARED ETERNAL GIFT"

No matter how lost or how trapped we were that night,
I wanted to remain in thine arms forever.

Twas a night of ecstacy, and pleasure
Which ultimately had a closure.

Shared was; past, present, and future,
Shared, forever, our lives.

Death hath no hold and shall take,
no hold long as I have thee.

Shared forever eternity,
Shared forevermore our lives.

© Copyright 2000 TOM BURNS - All Rights Reserved
Bathory
Junior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 11
OH.
1 posted 2000-01-04 09:46 PM


Tom I never thought I could find the one I have been looking for all my life.I have been happy for the first time I can ever rember when I found you.For
I shall always
love you more than words can tell.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-01-05 12:12 PM


Beautiful Azrael and welcome back  

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 2000-01-05 11:30 AM


I love your Shared Eternal Gift Tom!
Beautiful. I love this style you've used too   So glad to be able to read your heart again.Happy that you are blessed with love!


Jenny Lee


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Niemczak
Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 51

4 posted 2000-01-06 04:47 PM


That was wonderful.
AZRAEL
Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 14

5 posted 2000-01-12 10:07 PM


Thank ye all tis good to be back yet again. And thanks especially go to you Kristi-LOVE YOU-

 If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die.

Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

6 posted 2000-01-12 10:38 PM


What emotion I see and feel in this great work.  I guess welcome back!!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


Local Rebel
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia
7 posted 2000-01-12 10:42 PM


Ventures darquely into passion...


AZRAEL
Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 14

8 posted 2000-01-12 10:50 PM


To all those who may not know I used to be called suicidal dreams in here so if you like check out my past works.

 If all who are born were ment to die, I should never have been born, for I shall never die.

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