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FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 267


0 posted 2000-01-03 03:48 PM


Awake... you have a part to play
It belongs to another’s day

She will see you as she chooses
As it’s played, no one loses

You may be the one that suits her
But you cannot be the suitor

It’s her turn to rule this world today
Your time will come, another way

The set today... maybe the park
Or if she chooses... you’ll revel in the dark

Her consciousness constructs the scene
Images... beautiful... clear... serene...

Emotional responses design the plot  
Directing movement... in control, I’m not

This... her fantasy... I have nothing to say
Until tomorrow... when she will have a part to play



 There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix



© Copyright 2000 Robert Skinner - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-01-03 05:31 PM


Marvellous FreeByrd I can surely relate to this one.  I love how she has gathered her strength and then watch it!!  Bravo  

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 2000-01-04 01:40 AM


Incredible! I liked this one very much.
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 2000-01-04 08:45 AM


As always R, your work is extraordinary and shines.A Most excellent piece. Glad to be here to read it  

Jenny
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 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 01-04-2000).]

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