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winterinblue
Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 32


0 posted 1999-12-31 02:27 PM


Physical pain can never cut so keen -
And sharp as that which doth remain unseen.
- - -
In starkest night carving a roast of soul,
Tucking in onions pungent, plump and whole.
- - -
Flesh slicing dream
In silent scream
- - -
The abscess of the spirit to incise,
For absolution, tearless torment cries.



[This message has been edited by winterinblue (edited 01-02-2000).]

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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-31 05:28 PM


Wow!!  Straight out of the olde worlds this is!! I loved it, and glad to see you weren't too graphic!!     Happy New Year.

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Niemczak
Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 51

2 posted 1999-12-31 07:00 PM


Awesome!!!!!!  WOW!!!  That was great!
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 2000-01-02 04:01 PM


Very Gothic in style.
I love the point behind it and the wording  
Thanks for posting this one.


Jennifer


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


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