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jenn991013
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since 1999-12-30
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0 posted 1999-12-30 01:03 AM



finally the day has come
and i let you in
only because you promised
you wouldn't break me
i don't believe you
i just can't help but think
about the past
         the pain
            the lonely nights
               the endless tears
that you have caused
what am i doing?
i am building myself up to fall again
only this time there is no net
don't let me down
i couldn't handle the heartache

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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-12-30 01:14 AM


A road that I seem to travel a lot myself.  The road of "heartache" that is.  Sometimes it's hard to tell if they're lookin for me or I'm lookin for them.  Great poem, and welcome to the Dark Forum.

Michael

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-30 11:51 PM


Yes welcome indeed.  It makes you wonder doesn't it?  Do some people set themselves up for let downs constantly, inadvertantly of course.  We mess with things when we know we shouldn't be there anyways??  
But as we all must, we keep trying to find love a home.  Well done  

 At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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