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~darkangel~
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since 1999-12-18
Posts 8


0 posted 1999-12-25 12:26 PM





My eyes watery
My face numb
My hands tremble
My legs weak

My mind wonders
My heart broken
My soul alone
My feelings cynical

My hope disappeared
My dreams shattered
My hate stronger
My happiness cynical

My life empty
My mom alone
My dad gone
My life cynical



 

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~Red~
Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 36
chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a.
1 posted 1999-12-25 02:05 PM


i really like this poem...and as you responded to mine...i can feel your pain...i'm sorry for your loss...you can email me to talk..
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-25 05:23 PM


So sad to be so cynical on Christmas, there really is always something to be happy about, look hard, it is hiding there somewhere...   Well written.

 Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas..
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



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