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Holden
Junior Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 26
Brighton East, Victoria, Australia

0 posted 1999-12-24 05:58 PM


I Wonder on the day I die
If I will know and still ask why
Or will it be a bad surprise
Wake up one morning to see I died
How many will care when I pass by
Black hearse on the streets in the casket I lye
Will people line the streets or run and hide
Paying respects to a life flown by
Will people think about what they hate
Will the Lord welcome me through the gate
Or will he just give it to me straight
Tell me why and show me my mistakes
Give me a chance to rectify
And a chance to say good-bye
A time to tell the truths for lies
I wonder on the day I die


 'I once picked a daisy's petals searching for an answer. I went through 10 daisy's before getting the answer I was looking for...I love you.'

© Copyright 1999 Jared - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-25 05:22 PM


Interesting theory,  I don't think you get the second chance after death though  

 Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas..
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Quiet Lightning
Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 56

2 posted 1999-12-26 03:44 PM


Someone will always miss you when you die.
Even if you were to die you will always be remembered.

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