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Holden
Junior Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 26
Brighton East, Victoria, Australia

0 posted 1999-12-24 05:35 PM


My knees begin to shake when you are in my sight,
I'm filled with curiosity my is filled with fright.
When will these feelings stop, when did they even start?
How can I listen to my mind without ignoring my heart?
I'm so confused please tell me what I should do,
I can't think of anything except for me and you.
Should I ignore my feelings for you or just give it time?
I can't think straight when my heart controls my mind.


 'I once picked a daisy's petals searching for an answer. I went through 10 daisy's before getting the answer I was looking for...I love you.'

© Copyright 1999 Jared - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-12-25 05:30 PM


You want my opinion, that of an outsider looking in?  Life your life without, go on live each day to it's fullest, if it happens it was meant to be, if it doesn't it never was.  The other alternative is to confront and declare strong feelings.  More risky if you ask me.  

 Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas..
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
2 posted 1999-12-26 09:37 AM


i like this one...i feel this same way sometimes...
jascanvey
Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130
England
3 posted 1999-12-27 05:16 PM


Yeah, I know exactly how you feel.........
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