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Sven
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0 posted 1999-12-23 12:15 PM


The snow falls on this moon-lit night
December's chill fills the air
Times like these, my soul longs to take flight
To be with you, next to you there.

The snow glistens like the stars above
Falling like jewels from the sky
And all alone here, I send you my love
Hoping you'll hear me, as I try not to cry.

I step out the door, into the snow
The cold chilling every inch of my frame
I see the snow falling, I feel the wind blow
But nothing can deaden this pain.

Melody of my heart, love of my life
Hear my song above the din
Take me away from this noise and this strife
And to your arms take me in.

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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Isis
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1 posted 1999-12-23 07:19 PM


God Sven this is so filled with love and longing so beautiful..  *tear*.  Excellent work my friend.  Merry Christmas  

 Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas..
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Michael
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2 posted 1999-12-23 09:12 PM


Oh man, I can feel the aching in this one Sven.  Beautifully done, deep with emotion.  Great piece.


Michael

JennyLee
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3 posted 2000-01-02 04:42 PM


Beautiful Sven...
It has played a cord upon my soul  
Thanks.


Jenny


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


danni
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4 posted 2000-01-04 12:12 PM


Beautiful as always Sven...
Sven
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5 posted 2000-01-04 02:55 PM


Thank you all my friends. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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