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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Cumulus impulses Opaque thoughts Attempts to cull any recollection Unable to make realities connection Temporal bone beginning to ache Demigod of void… please give me a break Suspension of consciousness escaping my grasp Grey matter feeling the coarse steely rasp I’ll breathe the derivative and beat the master Stalemate… and recipe for disaster The time of light between night and next Has passed me by withholding my best One lost from a lifetime doesn’t seem like much A time when the power should be… within touch Feelings of desolation In need of rehabilitation With hope of coherency on the way Images and impressions may return some day -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
 Good Job! "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, awesome imagery here, FB. Very powerful - definately one of your best in my opinion. Michael |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
ThanX Star. Michael, You know my feelings on responding and having your work pop to the top, but it was important to me to let you know I read and appreciate your comments. This started out as something totally different. This one had a mind of it's own and how it wanted to be written. Only the second time that ever happened. Very strange experience. But I liked it. I'm not one to ever refuse help when it comes to the writing. -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Awesome work and imagery! I agree with Michael all the way on this one. More!! Encore'  Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas.. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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