navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » Ecstacy (a poem from him)
Dark Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic Ecstacy (a poem from him) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-12-21 11:19 AM


**This is a poem my x boyfriend just sent to me via email...i thought it was cute so here it is...****

Joys untold on a clear spring day,
And a babies gentle tear,
Sailing the wind on a pristine bay,
And holding the one I love, so near.

The laughter and the love of friends,
The rainbows colours - seven,
Cold winter nights - not wanting to end,
My life with you... spent in Earthly heaven.

The brilliant colours of the setting sun,
Our walks along the emerald sea,
The feeling I had when your heart was won,
For, that is what you have meant to me.

(does anyone know who wrote this?? just wondering)


 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

© Copyright 1999 Ashley Keenan - All Rights Reserved
Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 1999-12-21 02:47 PM


I don't know that this has been written by anyone. . . but I will check further. . .

It could be from one of those Blue Mountain Arts books. . . it seems to be that style. . .

But, who knows starboards?  Maybe he wrote it himself?

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
2 posted 1999-12-21 03:55 PM


Thanks sven--
  I just want to know what it means...will someone please analyze it...i'm not that great at these things! Thanks again!

    
Ashley

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-12-21 11:53 PM


Ashley hon, maybe he saw your face the other day and felt badly, wanted to be nice?

OR

He is being a sarcastic so and so...   my advice don't acknowledge it whatsoever and see what more if anything happens.

It is confusing though isn't it?

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
4 posted 1999-12-21 11:56 PM


Isis...
  He said that i took the poem wrong and that he was saying just "what i wanted to hear" tell me that isnt harsh...i really need to talk to you isis!

Starboards

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-12-22 12:03 PM


Well then it looks like he is being harsh.  Ashley hon he sounds like a real --- just ignore any contact from him, change your email address if you have to.  
Get on ICQ so you can really talk when you have a problem.. this is way too hard, what if I hadn't been on, and you do need to talk?
I'll be waiting for your response..((HUGS))< !signature-->

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 12-22-1999).]

starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
6 posted 1999-12-22 12:10 PM


Isis...
  He said that it's better to have loved and lost then to never have loved...this i believe is wrong in this case...i told him i wish i never loved him and that i feel nothing for him, which is a total lie...please help!!

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 1999-12-22 12:16 PM


Honey I wish I could help I'm too far away..*sigh*
What he said it is better to have loved and lost etc. is nice, but did he mean it??  He could still have been being sarcastic.???
Just steer clear, if it keeps up change the email address..
It is so hard when they don't let you recover/get over them by stirring things up like this.
You know you made a mistake with him, but now it's time, to ignore his petty childish crap, turn a blind eye to him, smile, best foot forward and get on with it.  He's not worth the effort of a brain wave/thought.
Can you talk to your Mom is she understanding in these matters?  I could always talk to mine, she didn't understand sometimes but was always sympathetic.
You need some good times, good friends, TLC,
laughter and (((((((((HUGS)))))))))))  I send them telepathically...  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
8 posted 1999-12-22 12:20 PM


he may have ment it...who knows...my mom never understands...it was just so harsh that he showed signs of "wanting to get back together" and then turns around and says that he was just saying what i wanted to hear...i wish i could just put my best foot forward but it's alot easier to say then to do...if you could give me some more advice i would love it right now...
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
9 posted 1999-12-22 12:51 PM


More advice??  Sorry but no, ignore him.  Move on, focus on the good in your life, you do have good.. think about it...  Friends, loved ones, hobbies, Passions, sport, movies, music.  Like i said the other time it sounds dicky but keep your mind and body busy, it helps, then you are too tired to waste time thinking about him.  He is a jerk and not worth one wasted thought or effort
((((((((((HUGS))))))))))))))

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
10 posted 1999-12-22 12:53 PM


Thanks isis....right back at u ((((((HUGS))))))

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
11 posted 1999-12-22 12:59 PM


Feel better now hon??. hope so  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
12 posted 1999-12-22 01:01 AM


yeah, just another sudden dose of reality...too much for me to handle right now...

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
13 posted 1999-12-22 01:09 AM


I am not belittling you but trying to be witty????  OK???   It's only 4 sleeps till Santa comes so smile for Santa!!!  
If you need to talk anymore just email me.
Love ya Ashley (((((((HUGS)))))))))

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
14 posted 1999-12-22 09:33 AM


Thanks isis! (((((((((HUGS))))))))) Nope, now only three!! hhehehehehe...gosh i feel like i'm 5!

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
15 posted 1999-12-22 07:24 PM


You are never too old to enjoy Christmas  
It's my favourite time of year  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
16 posted 1999-12-22 11:16 PM


Mine too, isis, mine too....

      

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » Ecstacy (a poem from him)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary