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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
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California

0 posted 1999-12-21 05:12 AM


INSATIATE

Immoral,
insatiate.
Always needing more,
Feed me!
Fill me!
Grind your withering body
through these dripping
channels of lust.
Dare you try
to slake this need?
I shall bleed you
I shall absorb your love,
your will, your life.
Never enough!
Never close to enough!
Go away,
you're useless to me now.
Red letters,
White lies.


Michael R. Anderson


[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 12-21-1999).]

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Fairy Colours
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 169
Sunrise,Fl,US
1 posted 1999-12-21 09:11 AM


Your work always has such powerful images. This is good.

--A Little Fairy--

starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
2 posted 1999-12-21 11:36 AM


Yes, good work michael...as always. I can sense bitterness in this poem, why??

Ashley

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-12-21 10:08 PM


I cannot help but notice the alphabetical reference my friend. I must concur.  

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
-------------------------------------------------------
"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)


poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
4 posted 1999-12-22 09:01 PM


Powerful....I'm with DE....I must concur.  
I would hate to be the person you wrote this about! Sucks to be them.....

I could see you on a stage, in the spotlight reading this....(clapping loudly with applause!)

For_Never
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America
5 posted 1999-12-24 03:39 PM


I wish I could feel this hatred you felt..
but I cannot even rise to that anymore..
life seems vaguely worth the effort anymore..
all I think ...if that is what anyone would call it..
isis the lay lines of void...
being nothing..
yet death isn't something I welcome..no more than I fear it...
sometimes I wonder... and I see
I believe ther is truly very little left of me..

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