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Cmooch
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since 1999-12-20
Posts 5


0 posted 1999-12-20 02:34 PM


-Bless the grave-


I've been cursed for life-
Not able to see the light-
I't was only a few years ago I felt things weren't right-
I never had a friend to the end-
That I could depend on-
When I looked for help it was gone-
But the curse was holding strong-
I didn't belong-
Anywhere I tried to fit in-
Forced to go through this alone I ducked home and stayed in-
Committing sins, gave me a way to believe-
I was the reason for the pain and that God did not leave-
I lost my trust-
Going insane-
Still praying that Jesus will help me through the rain-
I'm drained-
My brain won't stop It's caught repeating going on-
So I gathered up my thaughts and put my heart into this song-


(Chours:
Bless the grave-
I've been cursed 'til death-
Gave life everything I don't have anything left-
Except the beast underneath-
So I throw on the vest-
And pray that the curse is released when my soul put to rest)-


Bless the grave-
I pray after death I'll be saved-
And finally get that love I was promised but never gave-
Stuck in this cave-
Blind and wasting precious time-
When I should be out shinning, fine and getting mine-
Pass the twelve gage quick-
So I can blast me out of this b*tch-
Get out this ditch-
And for a switch finally get a grip-
It's time the tables flip-
And me to get what I deserve-
Just when I think it's over is when I'm kicked back to the curb-
Things don't ever want to get better, I'm stuck up in this curse-
Watching the water waste away while I'm burnning, dying of thirst-
Never last or first, I'm always in between-
Yelling at the top of my lungs but nobody heres me scream-
Don't know exactly what it means, I'm on Earth but I'm in Hell-
I pray when I'm deceased I'll get to eat and God will release the spell-


Chours-


If lifes a test-
Then so far I've been losing-
I've got God on my chest but the Devil has me choosing-
Abusing alchohol got me into brawls-
Withdrew from school made me loose my dream to play ball-
I feel small, Incompetent-
There is no stopping it-
So I hit the liquor again so I can gain some confidence-
I'm going down fast, thinking to blast to get the cash-
To help put this curse in reverse and move it to the past-
Rob you for your stash but earn your respect-
I'm angry enough to blast the Tek, lifting weights built me a steel flex-
I barely smile, my lifes a reck-
This hex got me in check-
Hit the deck if you see me comming I'll be gunning for your neck-


Chours-

© Copyright 1999 Cmooch - All Rights Reserved
Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
1 posted 1999-12-20 04:40 PM


Definately interesting...sort of reminds me of Limp Bizkit or Eminem...please excuse me if you don't like those people but the anger and pain in it reminded me of them. There are few people that I have met that have actually felt that they were "cursed", myself being one of them. It's most definately a feeling like no other....to think that you souly belong in darkness...to be completely alone. It's a bitch and I think you brought that out perfectly.

~*Dark Enchantress*~

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 1999-12-20 05:00 PM


I must agree with DE. . . but I think that you did a much better job than either of the artists that were mentioned. . .

Welcome to Dark Passions. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
3 posted 1999-12-20 05:43 PM


I'd like to hear this put to music, but the lyrics speak for themselves.
Keep strong.  The battle may be rough, but look for the light.  It's somewhere out there.

Btw, yes, welcome and keep posting!

 JOY


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-12-20 10:59 PM


Welcome to the dark Forum.  I too would like to hear your words put to music.  Always look for or towards the light it IS there always..    

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
5 posted 1999-12-20 11:36 PM


When i listen to songs i first notice the lyrics then the beat...if i heard this song i would love to hear it again because these lyrics are awesome! Nice job, and WELCOME!!!

Starboards

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

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