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Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

0 posted 1999-12-20 06:37 AM

Bending to find the pavement
Feeling its sun-warmed roughness
Tar on my fingertips
Tears on my cheeks
An overwhelming need to touch
And be touched
To experience
Both the mundane
And the wonderful
Bending backward into my mind
Feeling the cool depths
Of the enormity of innerspace
Thoughts float on ideas
Clouded by doubt's shadows
Keep in touch...
To find understanding

DB

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

1 posted 1999-12-20 08:44 AM

Good to here you again.

Very Mellow...

-RS

There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

2 posted 1999-12-20 09:19 AM

I have to echo freebyrd, very mellow...but sometimes mellowness is better than darkness, nice work!

starboards

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 1999-12-20 10:53 PM

Sweet Deep Blue nice to have a ray of light in here sometimes

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

4 posted 2000-02-02 10:30 AM

David....
Your free-verse is always a delight to read

To experience
Both the mundane
And the wonderful
Bending backward into my mind
Feeling the cool depths
Of the enormity of innerspace
Thoughts float on ideas
Clouded by doubt's shadows
Keep in touch...
To find understanding....
excellent passage here daer one

Jennifer

Wendy Flora
Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 182
Virginia

5 posted 2000-02-02 10:33 AM

Ooh! I like this a lot! I know exactly the feeling... the need to touch and be touched... the need of a single soul to make contact with the earth in order to know it's alive... Lovely! -wen

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

6 posted 2000-02-02 11:20 AM

Beautiful DB...so graceful and meaningful...
Nice to see you here again.

"They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience."
-Gandhi

~*Angel of Darkness*~

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