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Deep Blue Me
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since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake

0 posted 1999-12-19 11:24 PM


Ragged haggard wanderer,
Why do you run so quickly
To someplace you've never been?
Can what's behind you be so bad?
Life is but an illusion
But the evil is so real
Tu et je, nous sommes peut
So, so small
Lie to live
Live to deter death
Indefatigable et grand, est le mort.
It makes me wonder
Is the struggle really worth it?
Nothing to do but die
On an open road
Or in a cage
La ou, il n'importe.
No love lost
Death is the only winner
Yet, you fight to live feeble man
Fight on
Till the end
DB



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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-12-19 11:57 PM


Your words have been missed in this forum, D.B.  Glad to see you post here again.

"Nothing to do but die
On an open road
Or in a cage

So, true...we all end up in the same place, but I like to think how we handle the fight up till then matters somewhat.  
Good poem.

Michael

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-20 12:08 PM


I agree with Michael Deep Blue welcome back or even better welcome home  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
3 posted 1999-12-20 02:09 AM


Yes, welcome home! "Death is the only winner"--great line, though chilling to a degree...interesting poem, I'm liken it...

 *************************
"It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly"
-Dixie Chicks
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FreeByrd
Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

4 posted 1999-12-20 09:10 AM


I cheat when I have too.

I plan on givin death a run.

Welcome Home

-RS

 There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix



JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 2000-01-02 04:30 PM


Good One David.
I really like..Can what's behind you be so bad?
Excellent  


Jennifer


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
6 posted 2000-01-05 03:06 PM


Sorry for being so sketchy in my postings of late. Work is eating me alive, but there's a light at the end of the tunnel. I hope it's not Amtrak.

DB

patchoulipumpkin
Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 196
Bermuda
7 posted 2000-01-05 07:01 PM


Really nicely written, i love french, its my dad's mother tongue so i have a great appreciation for what it can deliver for interpretation.  Great.  The work itself is amazing, and so truthful "Indefatigable et grand, est le mort"  Beautiful.
Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
8 posted 2000-01-05 10:31 PM


Beautiful DB...glad to see you here again.
Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

9 posted 2000-01-05 11:33 PM


DB-- Im some what new to the site and by far this one made me think the most!!! Death is the only winner and Nothing to do but die are so true...... I personally must fight though as for that is all I know to do or been taught to do!!  Thinking words thank you.......Bojopy< !signature-->

 



[This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-05-2000).]

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