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Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 1999-12-18 08:52 PM

I guess you were just tired
of my self-isolation,
Guess you didn't really know
what you were dealing with,
And somehow you knew
that I really didn't love you,
Somehow I really didn't care
but believe me I wanted to

~Well, I didn't really have much to say except that. This happend a long while ago but I found my journal so I had to post some of my old poems that were never posted or anything. I don't really like the title but it was titeless and I couldn't think of anything better. (pretty sad, huh?) Once again, thank you for your time.~

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 1999-12-18 10:45 PM

short and to the point! I'm liken this one! "but believe me I wanted to" I loved this line! keep it up!

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

2 posted 1999-12-18 10:56 PM

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Hmmm...I'm too awake for this hour, but that's nothing unusual, right?

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 1999-12-18 11:44 PM

Now listen here Dark Enchantress!!! You stop apologising for everything you post!!!

Anything written from the heart is usally fine or beautiful ok?
I am not dead full on proud of everything I post either, but never apologise for that poem old as it may be, is still a piece of magic from you.

Well that is my belief anyhow

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

4 posted 1999-12-19 09:00 AM

Well, thank you very much Isis. =) I'll keep that in mind.

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

5 posted 1999-12-19 08:32 PM

Direct and to the point....

Nicely done

Encore!!! Encore!!! Encore!!!

-RS

There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

6 posted 1999-12-19 08:54 PM

There is something elegant about being able to say so much in the space of a breath ...

Well done, Dark Enchantress!

--Kess

You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

7 posted 1999-12-20 02:34 AM

Well the last two lines say a mouthful. They could stand, alone and be very powerful. Good job.

Michael

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

8 posted 1999-12-20 05:50 PM

I agree with Starboards and Michael. The last two lines.
"I really didn't care..but I wanted to." Yes, yes. No strength left to care, but you so want to only if....

JOY

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

9 posted 1999-12-20 06:05 PM

Well, you see, I had one of my little episodes and he couldn't handle it and I didn't care enough to try. As selfish and heartless as it sounds, I cared more about my own mental and emotional condition than my social life. Somehow I ended up getting kicked for it all but I learned a lot and it's those lessons that I'll always keep with me. Once again, I thank you all.

~*Dark Enchantress*~

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