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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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0 posted 1999-12-16 09:13 PM


My quiet moments are deafening,
The laughter all too rare,
How I love to laugh you know,
But who will really care..

The music I love isn't so pretty,
The poems aren't so good,
The books I read just leave me hanging,
My heart feels made of wood.

The birdsong it is rasping,
Not pretty to me today,
The phone rings shrill and hurting,
Once I heard things another way.

History how I love it,
But today in it I saw only misery,
Favourite movies hold no appeal,
No more the powers that be.

So I'll say an incantation,
For it cannot hurt,
It shall raise my soul a little,
Lift up and free of dirt.

My heart to thee,
My soul to thee,
By mystical moon,
Return to me........




 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
starboards
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1 posted 1999-12-17 09:12 AM


Isis--
  Great poem! How do you get the words to flow so fluently?? Okay, i'm praising you again, what's new right??
ashley


[This message has been edited by starboards (edited 12-17-1999).]

Michael
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2 posted 1999-12-17 02:56 PM


Sweet music...very well done, Isis.

Michael

Isis
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3 posted 1999-12-17 05:22 PM


Starboards, I can't tell you - it just happens.  Thankx to both you and Michael  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
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4 posted 1999-12-22 08:55 AM


I have no clue on putting together an incantation.

So I'll just say this to you.
Hope today brings you a smile and a wealth of laughter too.

-RS

 There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief

There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief

- Hendrix



Fairy Colours
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since 1999-12-02
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5 posted 1999-12-22 11:50 AM


This was something great to read.

 --A Little Fairy--

Sven
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6 posted 1999-12-22 12:22 PM


Isis,
      take a moment and look around you. . . there is plenty to enjoy, plenty to see. . . take a look around you and smile. . . then laugh. . . and think of one who makes you happy. . . no incantations needed. . .

Sing my friend, sing!!

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



jaxjoy
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since 1999-12-14
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7 posted 1999-12-22 06:10 PM


I feel those words in myself. Great work
Niemczak
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since 1999-12-15
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8 posted 1999-12-22 06:28 PM


What you wrote was (I am at a loss for words as to how I would express it)  I loved it though.  Very Much
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
9 posted 1999-12-22 06:30 PM


Why thankx  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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